Literal Nirvana

I wonder
if the feeling a man gets
right at the point
of penetration

is as good
as the feeling
a woman gets
when he sticks it in her?

There's a glazed look
that washes across
her face
when she's taken

that seems
like literal
nirvana,

her eyes
fog over
and her lips part
as she swallows
the moment

before arching up
and melting into
the pillows and blankets

in sweaty passionate sticky communion.

It gets me hard
just thinking about it.

• A former member wrote: got me wet
  
  
• On Wednesday, July 4, 2007, Circe (609) wrote:
  
  wow. damn.
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:
  
  Probably not. We get the dry uncomfortable side of the condom. This is best thing I've read all day. Great write.
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, saintedmad (1425) wrote:
  
  a stark contrast to the last i read of yours, but nevertheless truthful; and i have always wondered the opposite of men.. . if it is more 'surreal/felt/velvety' on your end of the bargain?....deftly written tho ..ness
  
  
• On Friday, June 22, 2007, elisa (1892) wrote:
  
  such a passionate pondering ........ you penetrate with words.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, cemetarydance (27) wrote:
  
  Mmmmmm.damn that was a good write and right to the point loved every bit of it.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, carlosjackal (1798) wrote:
  
  Love it! When she really wants you this is exactly what it's like. Top draw! -Carl
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:
  
  "as she swallows the moment." this was sexy, seductive but not over done. I enjoyed all of it.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, blue (1606) wrote:
  
  ha! I know this, I know this well. Well spoken. ~b