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Run for Cigarettes by johntaiyu
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Run for Cigarettes

~ johntaiyu ~

We made a run
for cigarettes
right before bed
together
the other night

and all I could think
was how
for so long
I believed
the days
where there was someone
beautiful and loving
and light and open
like her
for me
were so far gone
I can't even remember

© 2007 johntaiyu
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  • elisa On Thursday, May 24, 2007, elisa (1893) wrote:

    such a rare appreciation ...expressed beautifully

  • dying angel On Wednesday, May 23, 2007, dying angel (1076) wrote:

    i don't know if i should look away or read this a second time. this felt to me, like a private thought. a naked statement made between you and your conscience. such a naked piece. short but brutal.

  • saintedmad On Wednesday, May 23, 2007, saintedmad (1418) wrote:

    wow; stately wished and worded. . .a simple clearcut snippet of life and love and longing in such an everyday ordeal; you captured it nicely. ness


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