Run for Cigarettes

We made a run
for cigarettes
right before bed
together
the other night

and all I could think
was how
for so long
I believed
the days
where there was someone
beautiful and loving
and light and open
like her
for me
were so far gone
I can't even remember

• On Thursday, May 24, 2007, elisa (1893) wrote:
  
  such a rare appreciation ...expressed beautifully
  
  
• On Wednesday, May 23, 2007, dying angel (1076) wrote:
  
  i don't know if i should look away or read this a second time. this felt to me, like a private thought. a naked statement made between you and your conscience. such a naked piece. short but brutal.
  
  
• On Wednesday, May 23, 2007, saintedmad (1418) wrote:
  
  wow; stately wished and worded. . .a simple clearcut snippet of life and love and longing in such an everyday ordeal; you captured it nicely. ness