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Of You by johntaiyu
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Of You

~ johntaiyu ~

Being with you
is like standing beneath
a waterfall
and being drenched
in the mist
of joy.

© 2008 johntaiyu
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  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (161) wrote:

    Whats great is when you truly can be with someone under the water falls. That is truly bliss......

  • Mari On Tuesday, September 23, 2008, Mari (530) wrote:

    beautiful, obviously. what else is there to say? nothing that i know of, anyway..

  • saintedmad On Friday, September 12, 2008, saintedmad (1420) wrote:

    so complete. a precisionary image. almost felt rather than merely read. +nessa

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, September 11, 2008, carlosjackal (1804) wrote:

    Fucking genius :) This one of those pieces. Rare. Great. And on reading it, think, "Why didn't I write this?!!! I love it!" Heh, or something =) -Carl

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, September 11, 2008, carlosjackal (1804) wrote:

    *is

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, September 11, 2008, Alanarchy (1487) wrote:

    Damn you.


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