Silver Dharma Moon

They don't like these zen poems
near as much
as the ones
about sex or drinking.

I get lots of kudos for those,
but these here
where open hearts and mist
is about all that happens
just don't seem
to get people's attention.

I should try a car chase
through fields of pompous grass
under the silver dharma moon

It'd never end.

• A former member wrote: kudos!
  
  
• On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Mari (529) wrote:
  
  i like them. theyre my favorite =(
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, saintedmad (1426) wrote:
  
  maybe that kind of attention you just dont really need; false accolades reaped under pseudolines; write of you and all will fall as it should; i enjoyed this open honest piece....without strings or showyness..... .
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, MESUN (288) wrote:
  
  k, i think i see where you're coming from. no one stops to smell the roses anymore, we only look for computer graphics. we need diamonds when glitter should be enough. i almost blew this off, but i'm glad i didn't.
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, elisa (1891) wrote:
  
  '....I should try a car chase through fields of pompous grass...' ...or come on the peak of a voluminous mountain...... haha.... i completely understand where you're coming from... and i couldn't agree more... very well said.
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, Guillotine (191) wrote:
  
  intriguing. I enjoy these writes immensely though, their slow-paced, insightful ponderings speak to me a lot more than the usual writes that seem to litter DP these days.
  
  
• On Monday, June 25, 2007, capt_funguy (909) wrote:
  
  who are .."they" ?
  
  
• On Monday, June 25, 2007, Err0r (451) wrote:
  
  I know what you mean. I respect a person however who stays focused and doesn't die out for attention. Very Karmalicious write.