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"Song to a Virgin in a Garden" by CrestFallenSky

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There she fell, ah there she fell,
Down
Where scarlet moonbeams dwell,
I held her once,
Or was it twice?
I caught a glimpse
of paradise,
These burning eyes,
My lonely eyes,
They caught a glimpse
Of paradise,
But was it real, so real to me,
I know not now, my time forgotten.
Without the words
To laud her fall
Down
To the garden's heart
Where moonbeams dwell.
In a garden she fell?
Ah yes, she fell,
caught by radiant, scarlet shards,
And so, was it once,
Or merely twice,
That I caught a glimpse
Of paradise?



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On Saturday November 8th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:
yes, that was absolutely lovely to read. it danced and floated gracefully through my mind. :::OLd


On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:
This is sowonderful... I could almost hear the music through your words... *Lilith*


On Sunday May 18th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
simply beautiful.. The flow was very sad and settled.. ~liked it a lot!


On Sunday May 18th, 2003, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:
This is very pretty. Good work.. :)


On Sunday May 18th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
"...glimpse Of paradise?..." is how I feel, as I begin to read your poetry... beautiful words, and the rhytym flows w/ a classical style rhyme pattern which works wonderfully.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (211) writes:
Well done, soft melodic flow. Keep writing,S.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
This was an amazing read. Beautiful imagery.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, cre (508) writes:
Very nice ... has a lovely cadence.



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