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Sorrow dressed in arabesque tresses
Upon a slender evening gown,
Queen of a dream world she is
Lifeless, yet truly animated,
A ballroom lit with starsong light

I am not so perspicacious
As I might ask myself to be,
My words are not so deft
To be recited in her dreams

I softly whisper in her ear
The lines of a minstrel’s hymn,
A hymn I scribed by dark of night
Beneath a waning moon

     “Masque I thee mote
     Upon thee I dote,
     Mine with thine
     Thine times nine,
     Hastily we make respite
     And dwelleth we within these winds,
     My beloved Colleen,
     Mine with thine
     And thine times nine.”

Six serpentine candles flicker with life,
As she awakens from her deepest slumber
And hears me for the first time

No healing hand do I poses,
In my arms she still shivers so,
I wipe the tears from her pallid face
And replace them with my own,
Yet I dare not say, I fear…
If I opened my eyes,
Would she still be there?

The two lonely ones,
So profound are the things they need to say,
Yet so much is left unsaid.




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On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (589) writes:
-- recited in her dreams". . this whole piece was as beautiful and realistic as a dream, and I'm completely drawn in. . *faves*. . wow. .


On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (589) writes:
"Lifeless, yet truly animated, A ballroom lit with starsong light". . this was just amazing, the imagery/the grace and ease of it all. . just beautiful. i agree with twi, who quoted some amazing lines as well. . "My words are not so deft To be reci


On Friday May 14th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
your words are so graceful. so full-filling. profoud things left unsaid...happens every day. this is so true. and profoud in itself...im seriously feeling this piece."Six serpentine candles flicker with life,


On Friday May 14th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
As she awakens from her deepest slumber And hears me for the first time " o god...such meaning..."I wipe the tears from her pallid face And replace them with my own, Yet I dare not say, I fear… If I opened my eyes,


On Friday May 14th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
Would she still be there? " incredible..need i say more?



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