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"Vanilla, Strawberries And Tchaikovsky" by Guillotine

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"Somethings come between us, my love" she whispered;-
As we laid amongst the stars of our pride,
"Something insidious and solid as bedrock" she murmured;-
While we slept amongst our hypocrisies.
"And somehow, I find I must debate every night we spend,
Curled within our dreamscape."
"Seems our spark has gone, diminished as a romantic's rose"

I devoured it;-
Thought upon it;
"Something about us, too intermittent,
   too inter-missionary,

  - rekindle this spark!"

And so we shuffled our heart and positions;
"Succumb down to my deepest core" - I exhaled,
And like a voyeur, watched my existence swallowed;
 - I wet my lips;

Conversation muffled as she spread her inner-most self,
Choking my words with the sweet musk of her desires;


   - catch breath, inhale!

  Jaw, like glass,
Too many words stopped at the tip of my tongue.
No arguments, here.

My lapse in time to a rythmic heartbeat,
 a thunderous ovation symphony as it crescendos,
 . . . Climax!
 (Tchaikovsky's 1812, a rapturous moment)
Cannon's fire, once, twice, I lost... count.

H.eartst.op

  - catch breath, inhale!

exhale


"God should have stopped time for us," (soft.breath;finale)



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On Friday April 18th, 2008, saintedmad (848) writes:
"like a voyeur" indeed.. .i feel i am intruding on the most intimate of exchanges; thoughtfully provocative in all the smallest ways, the ways that make every nuance of body and soul cascade and tremble. ..rush....and leaves the reader slightly lightheaded and openmouthed. ..or at least it did me [esp the 4th and 5th strophes]...nothing should come per se between . ...en vibrato. ..~nessa


On Monday March 10th, 2008, thesuccubusreturns (16) writes:
as always im in awe of ur work. brillient


On Sunday March 9th, 2008, carlosjackal (1555) writes:
I really enjoyed the thought you put into the content and format of this piece. Brilliantly done =) -Carl


On Sunday March 9th, 2008, carlosjackal (1555) writes:
;-


On Monday March 10th, 2008, carlosjackal (1555) writes:
P.S. Have you heard much from Colin since his Manc invasion of the land of Oz?


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, RubyXero (427) writes:
seems kinda like he did. nice.


On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (282) writes:
Beautiful. Absolutely magnificent, I am in love with this. Also, I love Tchaikovsky.



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