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Weakened by the fall
Days are done and gone
Condemn none, forgive all
Follow your lifes call
Take it in,
Every last word
Never repeat
Evil things you've heard

Breathe in our ancestors air
We are no better than they
Hear the wisdom they share
This is the fall of day

Weakened by the fall
Nights are cold and long
Darkened sun, forget all
Memories are gone
Push it out
Every last thing
Always rethink
What evil can bring

Breathe in our ancestors air
We are no better than they
Hear the wisdom they share
This is the fall of day

Shattered walls shall fall
Weakness now is gone
Shaking hands, hating all
Hear the gun sounds call
Take me in
One more suicide

Breathe in our ancestors air
We are no better than they
Hear the wisdom they share
This is the fall of day
My tithes are paid
Paid with my tears cried




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On Monday January 9th, 2006, Nadir (619) writes:
Awesome I love the point, elegant rhyming and feel to it. The link between ages/time can be a static feel, something that I feel I havnt obtained but feel in glimpse. I should maybe too stand more in the wind ^^ great write


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
I agree with everyone, definitely elegant and so true. Great piece. Julia*


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
I agree... great piece


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, knightmirror (424) writes:
this was very refreshing to read....not many write about what they see in the world and how it makes them feel....such as the things unseen but not unfelt...this is different and very original...thanks for sharing....knight


On Sunday December 25th, 2005, weyvern (103) writes:
The world is broken and poetry like this heal it a little you have a true gift


On Saturday December 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (39) writes:
damn it made me want to cry.... i read it to my mom she started to


On Saturday December 24th, 2005, dead_inside (45) writes:
beautiful piece of writing, great talent.


On Saturday December 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:
This is absolutely elegant! Great work.



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