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my venus

Loving you and belonging to you
I hate you and loath you
stop staring at me
you are not me
I hate you cuz you're me
and thats why I cant love you
You are my venus
my venus fly trap
I cut you I damage you
I do everything I can to you
but all the pain comes to me
Because in cutting you i damage me
I hate you cuz you're me
and because I cant hurt you
You are my Venus
My venus Death Trap

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On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, veingo (592) writes:

This one, along with "mirror mirror" reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago. I know the feeling. ^V^

On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:

i like this piece. i know what this feels like. "I hate you cuz you're me and thats why I cant love you" good write

On Monday December 26th, 2005, dead_inside (45) writes:

i like this, it sounds like me, i hope you dont really feel like that, you shouldnt coz youre a great person, take care

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