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The Mire

The Mire
transpires
My thoughts
set on fire
I tire
I wilt
In the silt
of the Mire
limbs tire
eyes close
predisposed
Like the Rose
as it froze
Fro' the Snows
Mighty blows
from the Mire
Sweet brier
illed; Frozen
now broken
deformed
from the Storm
frigid Snows
Often blown
Top the Mire
I, helpless
breathe deep
In the Winds
O' chill'd sleep
To one day
retreat
Fro' the Breeze
Of this Mire
Such dreams
Oft' fleeting
Decieving
Believing
That one day
Sun's warmth
may calm Storms
'pon the Mire
To believe
In such Dreams
Often seems
to esteem
the weak Stem
Ay' condemned
In this Mire
To Dream!!!

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On Thursday January 12th, 2006, LordBrosnian (65) writes:

All of that for this piece of shit? You people ARE SICK!!! *raspy chuckle*

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, evolve (2246) writes:

Poised&steady 'til tumultuous end. Near-overwhelming flow. Winding and flawless. Thank you.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:

the rhyming seemed so natural...i like the way you structured the poem, so it actually flows with the words.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Wow, that is brilliant!

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

good stuff

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, elisa (2017) writes:

immersed in the clay.......molding the perfect world

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Shewolf (39) writes:

I throw rose petals upon your stage, simply awesome.......~Shewolf~

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, veingo (585) writes:

The rhyme, and flow of this is wonderful. Just awesome! ^V^

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1137) writes:

this was a powerful waterfall crashing upon boulders. it echoed into the sound of the water pounding. and the rhyme flowed effortlessly.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

poetry incarnate! well done..........urban

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