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"Suddenly I See..." by Crimson Shade

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Suddenly I see what lies beneath your eyes,
Was it my compromise that bred your lies?

Suddenly I see that you take and never give,
Was that the way I’m supposed to live?

Suddenly I see that I have been abused,
Was it my innocence that you used?

Suddenly you see that I’ve been crying,
It was because I was trying.

Suddenly I see that you were the pain inside of me,
That is why I’m leaving you for me.



© 2006 Crimson Shade

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On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Mnemora (19) writes:
I'm kinda new to dp, but this is definitly one of the most inspiring works I've read here.(moth bows, humbled)


On Saturday October 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1033) writes:
I miss you, friend.


On Saturday May 20th, 2006, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
I really liked this, I felt a bit of my own life wrapped up within it's few lines. The ending being one of such strength, to be able to walk away from something. This was incredible!


On Wednesday April 5th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1033) writes:
I'm reading this again.... You just have such a beautiful way of putting emotions down. It touches my soul so profoundly. I hope all is well m'dear. *hugs* ♥Julia~


On Monday February 27th, 2006, darkdesires (174) writes:
wow... powerful... and has corny as it sounds... I can feel this dead on. I love how you can actually articulate this so beautifully.


On Wednesday February 22nd, 2006, Future of Despond (94) writes:
Where better to look for friends than in yourself?


On Monday February 20th, 2006, island warrior (300) writes:
Ended on a positive note.


On Friday February 17th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1033) writes:
omg Crim! That is so touching and utterly saddened my soul. Sometimes it's hard to do things for ourselves. You should be proud hun. This is bittersweet. Beautiful just like you. *hugs* Julia~


On Thursday February 16th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
Awwww*Hugs Crimson* that was beautiful and sad and full of sorrow it made my heart cry out for you



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