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"The Passage of the Sun" by Crimson Shade

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As the spring breeze wakes me to the glory I do behold,
And the robin’s song puts the shadows to flight,
The sun takes its first steps on a well-worn road,
Stirring life, once again into existence.

And now the sun bathes in its own omniscience,
As the butterflies flutter and the flowers do unfurl,
The pallid light reveals our true intentions,
As life endures the scars of survival.

And now the failing light comes to bear,
As the sun struggles with its daily death throws,
The robin’s song is now of silence as the shadows do creep,
The sky sheds crimson tears as life begins its slumber anew.




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On Sunday February 19th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (751) writes:
Great piece! I like your imagery for the sunrise "The sun takes its first steps on a well-worn road" - very creative. Ciao, T/S


On Saturday February 11th, 2006, Wolk (56) writes:
Crimson tears. Great one


On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:
the imagery in this was absolutely lovely..the approach it took, flowing and peaceful.


On Monday January 23rd, 2006, An Expired Member (32) writes:
This is beautiful. You have certain flow and feeling in your writting that i cant get enough of. Beautiful write...


On Thursday January 12th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
Dang... I had to read this again today! It is just so beautiful. I think I may just read it every day! *smiles* Awesome piece. Julia~


On Monday January 9th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
You always amaze me with your writing. This paints such a picture of the sun setting I didn't want night to come!


On Monday January 9th, 2006, Mistress Shadow (364) writes:
Well thought through and very refreshing! Thank you! ~T


On Sunday January 8th, 2006, LordBrosnian (65) writes:
Very well written...I appreciatiate some antimodernistic writing...It's the REAL stuff...very refreshing


On Sunday January 8th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:
The succession of your stanzas fit so perfectly with the risings and settings of the sun. Your imagery is as realistic as a painting. Beautiful write. *Evangel*



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