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You see clocks in my eyes,
Turned forward….
Before I caught a glimpse
Of the second hand
----/---Whisking me away----------

If you see flight scars
On my arms
…Remember…
Looks can be deceiving.
I never once
Took to the sky
(Without you.)

And the curve of my back
Never molded to your chest
Because my wings got in the way.

I was never your angel
But I hoped I could be her someday

Supplies:
Ten minutes, an HB pencil, and a piece of computer paper.

Thank you to the lovely Jes for the poem. And even though I had to deal with your shananigans while trying to come up with one, thank you to the equally lovely Dave for the title. *smile*

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On Sunday January 28th, 2007, carlosjackal (1656) writes:

Excellent sketch..I hope you keep posting your work, you truly are talented and deserve to go places. Big Thanks go to King Crazy Dave as it was on his profile I discovered thee..Top Banana!

On Monday December 12th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:

gorgeous artwork, and the poem that accompanies it is breathtaking

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Ezimo (266) writes:

This was is pretty cool ~Trev

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, The anarchist (14) writes:

I like this one - till the shoulders she looks like you could just beat her down but her face... I think no one could rape this face. It's an art to get something like that in a picture.

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

I'm amazed that curves, lines, and shadows, can become something like this. And I'm baffled by your range of style. ^V^

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1822) writes:

Realy nice.. the eyes lips and wings were all wonderfull. guess it all are

On Monday December 5th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:

elegant and sexy, my fave features are her lips and bone structure....lovely work. ~m

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:

and crap i just noticed the poem, silly me...heart-wrenching end...'And the curve of my back Never molded to your chest Because my wings got in the way. I was never your angel But I hoped I could be her someday.' tear.

On Monday December 5th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:

haha. dave's a loser. ans muchly hated. your art is amazing. i'm grateful to even be near it. i adore you. -Glass

On Monday December 5th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:

i still think the title should be "alanis morrisette when she was hot with a horribly dislocated shoulder standing in front of an enormous puzzle piece"

On Monday December 5th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:

wonderful you two, i love it.

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