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"when is loving too much....wrong" by warmaprylrain

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inside my heart there is a little place
where I keep a box full of memories
and pictures of his face
but I have to keep it hidden
for thinking of him to long or too much
is strictly forbidden

but...sometimes I slip
and I start to want him again and I miss his touch
causing my mind to wander and take off running
and it is then that I feel it all over again
the moment he walked away with no intentions of ever returning

my breathing stops and I feel the sudden rush of pain
running to catch him, I slip on the tears falling from my sky
        tripping over his words
of
                 " GOODBYE "

ever wonder...
when the light fades out of your soul
when the warmth of being loved is gone
and your heart turns dark and leaves you feeling so cold
ever wonder....
if to give your heart, body and soul
...if loving with all you are...
is wrong?????



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On Thursday September 20th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
wow i have no words. the was fantastic


On Saturday November 25th, 2006, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:
yeah a long and nasty goodbye... a goodbye that seems to anchor to your place where she or he is always out of reach again... le sigh.


On Friday November 24th, 2006, Arianna (192) writes:
I've wondered it quite often... very good write, dear. ~A


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
You convey your loss so passionately. You definately get the feeling across. ....-samone


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
this is so sad. maybe keeping that box of memories is what's keeping you from letting go. i say dump the stuff, it works for me.


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, veingo (593) writes:
Something that I have wondered many times. A lovely write, April. ^V^



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