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as her heart tore

her heart had warned her
a blank stare across her face
huddled in a corner
she stares into space
an argument meaningless
he seemed to think
it all ended in her distress
still not enough to make him blink
the issues to her were much more
he finds in it some ill amusment
laughs, with her in tears as her heart tore

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On Wednesday August 6th, 2008, Pretty Ugly (2) writes:

relative, very relative

On Monday April 14th, 2008, fushigi no kaosu (88) writes:

a poem written with white-hot tears, each word riddled with pain... As always, beautiful and heartfelt. I'm glad to come back to such amazing verses.

On Saturday September 15th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:

This was amazingly painful and heartfelt, not to mention well written! Beautiful Write!

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Err0r (579) writes:

This was so expressive. My insides died with this write.

On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, Mylissa (1088) writes:

I can feel your words, great work.

On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

I can relate, I look for that in poetry... sweet

On Monday November 14th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

Yes there is pain here, but it is well put together. Nice job. ^V^

On Monday November 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:

thats a painfull poem its going on my fav for sure

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, StAinedNblood (43) writes:

This is a beautiful write. I can feel the pain, in it. Greath job

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