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im scared by the scars of time

if our callased hearts were to collide
could i part my chapped lips enough for yours to fit inbetween
could i re-open the wounds of love
to let these emotions bleed

i want to feel this


complete with the pain
if i was numb there wouldnt be anything to gain




i want to feel you




under your body i shake
your. hands . awake. me. from .my slumber...


could you strangle me alittle harder...i can still breathe



theres something magical about your eyes
it feels like im falling from the sky
 .......picking up speed and choking on stars.......


maybe i dont know exactly how much it means to have you here
but as you pull me from my dark illusions theres nothing left to fear



 i think you hold me just above goodbye







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On Friday January 6th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:
This is breath taking...wonderful write. ~*~Dying_Angel~*~


On Monday December 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:
i love the end line, i love it all... i have been choking on stars and now i want to be numb, it just shows how different the perspective of some can be, yet they can relate still. Amazing choice of words, variety of structure, i cannot fault it!


On Wednesday November 23rd, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (109) writes:
very beautiful poem!!!


On Monday November 14th, 2005, Grey Lies (241) writes:
magnificent...my heart tears at the words you've created. it flows within my heart...i love it!...it captures the feeling i feel now.


On Sunday November 13th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:
"i think you hold me just above goodbye" damn...such beauty transfixed into every word you have uttered...I cannot just let this fade from my memory...I gotta fave it. Beautiful. *Evangel*


On Saturday November 12th, 2005, AniDayz (1297) writes:
wonderous,flowing.beautifuly...magestic,in sort...amehtyst current...pulling...out from within...embedding an emblem upon a tapestry...synchronised in breath [shared]...renewed.this breathes enigmatically,yet, so simply:wonderfulfeel.


On Saturday November 12th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:
wow...this is great..i love it...it reflects how i feel sometimes..wow..this is just too good for words..great job! -Kel


On Saturday November 12th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
usually i hate rhyme, but this read out flawlessly- "theres something magical about your eyes /it feels like im falling from the sky /.......picking up speed and choking on stars......." this was lovely..in reading, i, too, am choking on the stars in this


On Saturday November 12th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
piece of beauty.



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