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Take Me Away from Here

Take me away from here
She said to me
But all the while that I'm here
In that place she'd love to be
All I can think is
Take me away from here
So I can find serenity

An odd complexity
Wouldn't you agree?
The place she'd love to be
Is the place I want to flee
And the place she wants to flee
Is the closest to home I've ever been

Maybe we should do like we planned
Meet somewhere in the middle
And forget about the sand
That's worn our souls to the very core
That is my soul's demand
Some days, I want nothing more

But other days, I just want her
Here to hold me
Let life become a blur
And her take pictures for me

Take me away from here
Our hearts both say
We must meet in the middle then dear
So that we can laugh and play

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On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, Mylissa (1057) writes:

Very sweet.

On Tuesday October 24th, 2006, Instant Insanity (735) writes:

nicely written, I can see how you just flowed out emotion. ][Nstant ][Nsanity

On Monday October 23rd, 2006, An Expired Member (20) writes:

that was beautiful, i absolutely loved it!

On Thursday October 19th, 2006, Instant Insanity (735) writes:

Hey! Did you write this poem for the girl in the picture with you? ][Nstant ][Nsanity

On Friday October 20th, 2006, hex (114) writes:

Yup

On Thursday September 28th, 2006, Philla (137) writes:

Ooooh so beautiful... Andyroo your words have the most uncanny way of wrapping around my heart and making me feel as I have never felt before. -Philla-

On Monday September 11th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:

This was incredible, Andrew, you amaze me still and have me locked in awe~Gothic

On Monday September 11th, 2006, elisa (1990) writes:

a subtle rhythmic stutter....heavy with heart and thick in thought[s] in the midst of gravity.

On Monday September 11th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

yeah, you weren't fully risky in the poem to grant my liking of the ryhme, but the sentiments are lullaby-ish, so the rhymthic feel is tangible, but like shards eludes a bit simplistic to cause outright fresh pleasure, buddy..

On Monday September 11th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:

but you get an A for effort!!

On Monday September 11th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:

A little of the simple rhyming made me twitch, but other than that I think it's cute :) Reminds me of a gentle ocean breeze...

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