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You said i'm the only one who cares
The only one that treats you right
Don't you dare
Take your own life
Don't you dare
Give up the fight

It started to break me down
I could hear you crying
Somewhere in the background
All I could think
Is if i lost you
I don't know what I'd do
If I lost you
I could never go through

I could never graduate
(I wouldn't have the strength)
I could never love again
(I'd feel too much hate)

Don't you dare
Take your own life
Don't you dare
Give up the fight
Cuz I care

I started to get scared
For the second time in my life
I asked you what you'd do
(I thought you'd use a knife)
You told me you didn't know
I said I didn't wanna say goodbye
Not to another good friend
I never wanna lose you

Don't you dare
Take your own life
Don't you dare
Give up the fight
Cuz I care

You promised me I'd never need to
Say goodbye to you
Not like the rest
If you break your word
It'll break me in two
I asked if my love was enough
You didn't answer at first
I asked you again
(I started to fear the worst)

Don't you dare
Take your own life
Don't you dare
Give up the fight
Because I CARE



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On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
this goes straight to the heart, so demanding yet desperate. i've known this feeling, known this love. i've been in this same position many times..its not fun. i'm glad she didnt. and sorry it took me so long to read this. -Kel


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
i was just scrolling through everyones works. and i saw this. all i have to say is wow. i've thought a different version of this over and over.


On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, Ravenblade (274) writes:
Very well done. This is a lot more along style that I enjoy reading, very forthright and honest. >Raven


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:
this is very straight to the point...demand for yourself, and others will succomb...great write


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, Crimson Shade (115) writes:
*stunned* - keep fighting - good write, lovely flow - keep caring.


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, An Expired Member (32) writes:
WOW...don't give up. Very good write, it's very expressive...



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