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First attempt at a love poem

It’s been awhile
Since I was able
To go and smile
But I’m still not stable

The day you called me up
It made me smile
The first time that I fucked up
You said to smile

Cuz I had you
And I don’t know
What I’d do
Without your glow

It’s been awhile
Since I was able
To go and smile
But I’m still not stable

The first time things started to spin
You were concerned
I laid down and found within
What I shoulda learned

Cuz I have you
And I don’t know
What I’d do
Without your glow

It’s been awhile
Since I was able
To go and smile
I’m getting stable

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On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (32) writes:

This was a great attempt i love it...

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, Collective Amnesia (248) writes:

if this really is your first attempt, good job, no jk, it is a great poem anyway no matter what attempt it was..keep it up

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:

...I knew this feeling once...I've wished, vehemently, to return myself to this, but that seems impossible. Wonderful portrayal...thank you for the reminder of how it used to feel to be here. *Evangel*

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

im glad you and manda have this..you guys look like a wonderful couple..and i hope you guys grow old together..you both deserve it..and this is only ur 1st attempt? it seems like your an expert on love poems already! great write, andrew :) -Kel

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