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short, bittersweet, and to the point

life's not fair
to the people that care
about more than the money
and more than the fame
the people that know hunnies
aren't just girls and a game

sometimes the tears won't come
even though i feel pain
the anger makes it numb
who's to blame
in a world like this
where things went and came
givin and takin bliss
and all the good things just fade in the rain

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On Saturday May 6th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:

the title is exactly what the poem is.. great write

On Friday January 20th, 2006, An Expired Member (32) writes:

It fits its title good work.

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

very trues, but it is the way it is, well pointed out

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:

I loved it Andrew it's beautiful and full of emontion. It went into my heart and stole feeling's. Great write

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