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dedication to deaths pawns

i need to start over
i can't back down
even when i'm sober
feel like i'm gonna drown

i try to keep
the world that i need
but i'm in too deep
feels like i'm gonna bleed

i used to have faith in this
i used to try
thankful that i found bliss
but now i wanna cry

today i'm homesick
and i wanna run away
back to the brick
wall that got in my way
but on that wall i wrote my soul
my good friends gone
but i gained control
fumes made me yawn
but i was unstoppable

car crash
from stealin cash
gun shots
from the parkin lots
this is my life
the gleam of a knife
cuttin through the night
when nothin seems right

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On Sunday March 5th, 2006, DeviantxSeraph (29) writes:

very good write.I think the people below me pretty much covered it.

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:

"All alone, or in two's, the ones who really love you walk up & down outside your wall." Enjoyed the last 4 lines the most. Thanx much.

On Thursday November 24th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

and you said this wasnt good..its awesome! great write... i like the last part..'the gleam of a knife cuttin through the night when nothin seems right' i can def. relate to that..and i jus wanted 2 say good job! -Kel

On Thursday November 24th, 2005, Army Barbie (499) writes:

I actually like this. The flow was almost seamless. Good job, dah'lin, good job.

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