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Within the Woods(Little Girl Lost)

One time my dad and I were driving home through the woods.
and a little kid jumped in front of the car.
We hit the kid so hard she flew 50 feet.
When she hit the ground her cranium exploded.
Blood and Brains were everywhere.
Scared.
we wrapeed her body in some old shirts of my dads.
We took her body home and took turns having sex with the dead corpse.
It was the best pussy I every had...Until it got cold.
Then we tied her up and put her in the botto of the lake.
she's still there.
She was six years old.

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On Friday January 9th, 2004, Methos (154) writes:

Though distasteful, this is something not alot of people write about..again, very disturbing, though very picturesque. A flamboyant piece, to say the least..-Methos

On Thursday December 4th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:

yes-yes well writen and all that. So, what is the point? I cant find it. Ok you can say that the point is for the reader to find, and its just creative writing from random thoughts. But, this reader is pissed becouse he dosnt see anything.

On Thursday December 4th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:

That may or may not be a rough comment, but its what I think of this kind of writing. I cant see the point in it. Maybe you can explain it to me.

On Friday December 5th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

there isn't supposed to be a point~whort_diddy

On Friday December 5th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:

So, you dont have a reason to write it?

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, SilentStalker (1341) writes:

...sick...but that never bothered me...good work... -Darun

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

It doesn't bother me either~whort_diddy

On Friday August 22nd, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

ICP are the worst band in this world...-Kefka

On Friday August 22nd, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

I will agree with you on that, but I used to like them~whort_diddy

On Friday July 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:

ewwww *barf again*

On Friday July 25th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

You call me sick, your the one that keeps throwing up~whort_diddy

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

Sounds like the basis of every ICP tune...Love the creativity, a little sadism never hurt anyone..*winx* ~Vel~

On Friday July 25th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

I used to listen to ICP, I didn't even think of that when I wrote this, I could be a member of ICP, Thanx for the comment~whort_diddy

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

I was not going to comment because this was so gross, but I came back and read it again, so beside the content it was well written and hell it was just sick, no offense ment............O

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

And I have read it twice, so it can't be all that bad..........O.

On Friday July 25th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

Ive been apart of darkpoetry for over two years, trust me, no offense taken, Ive gotten it all.~whort_diddy

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

jesus fucking christ. that was so sic. i know im going to sound really perverse writing that but i loved it. well done

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

Lol, I'm glad you liked it.~whort_diddy

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