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something poetic

pushing outwards
moving backwards in time
hoping to unwind the past
without a sound
walking on water
feels like a sin
when you have nothing
you just cant win
i want to rip off my skin
and be somebody else
take back all the words
the actions and the time
that i used so selfishly
not even thinking
who did i hurt when all i wanted
was love
why am i the way i am
and why cant i change

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On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:

i kind of adore the way you write.

On Friday November 3rd, 2006, carlosjackal (1598) writes:

A great regret poem that hits the spot with its brevity.

On Tuesday April 18th, 2006, mywristshurt (530) writes:

you are amazing.. i like this a lot, and i can't wait until you write your heart out.. this one is good

On Friday April 14th, 2006, monalisamarie (149) writes:

the last two lines have a nice sound to them, good work

On Friday January 27th, 2006, fenix2337 (14) writes:

unreal. hits on a personal level. very nice. thank you for letting me read your work. its been an honor.

On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Ainsof (1729) writes:

please don't tear off your skin...it would make writing such revealing, provoking, words all the more difficult...brutal image

On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Alanarchy (1608) writes:

"who did i hurt when all i wanted was love" those words are like a trip-line onto which I have stumbled and then was blown to dumb-struck pieces. Maybe I should just keep it simple and say, Nice work. I enjoyed, thoroughly.

On Thursday January 26th, 2006, darkdesires (189) writes:

Yeah... I know this feeling and I think you expressed it beautiful... I love "i want to rip off my skin and be somebody else"

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