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pure like the driven snow

ive deleted my life on canvas,
my story,
my words,
my song
my dance that no one else can dance,

my beliefs that no one else can have,
my soul wont ever be whole,
im looking for the other half of that,

like swift waves on the sea,
or a child inoccently eating candy on the beach,
i want a love thats pure.

but i can never wash this girl clean,

never again.

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On Monday September 10th, 2007, Bluegirl (243) writes:

Brilliant imagery, it made me sad..

On Tuesday January 23rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

you have a style i dig, about sound love, loss, i loved this, i will have to read more for sure

On Friday July 21st, 2006, Alanarchy (1697) writes:

Like putting out narthax candles, one at a time. Each one let's the shadow closer in. But this one, though simple, has alot of meaning to it. I only hope you find what you're looking for.

On Friday July 21st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

yep, the feel of this, the beach innocence and carefree matched with the melancholic tinge is an interesting balance of yearning memory and acceptance. Good good post, well done!!

On Thursday July 20th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:

that'll learn ya...next time you'll wear a condom

On Thursday July 20th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:

didn't i comment on this earlier.. if i didn't it's good.. i think i did though.. but, yeah

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