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My ode to me

damn everything in life changes so fast
The last thing I remeber
was bein 13 with no worries in sight
I had never had my heart broken by a boy
I thought I loved
I had never felt so alone or wanted to die
Then I grew older
I am only turning 20
still alot more in life,
for me to relize
its all kinda depressing
to know I am only turning 20
because in that 20 years I have fallen
so hard
I always get back up
It just takes a while sometimes
But
the shitty part is
is that I have many years to fall harder
so my question to myself is
will
I
Rise

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On Saturday March 17th, 2007, hex (116) writes:

You are a pheonix my friend, always rising from the ashes of your past. The important thing is that it's in the past, and your future's still as bright as the light shining from your wings.

On Saturday March 17th, 2007, Freebird (659) writes:

Of course you can rise, but only if you allow yourself to

On Saturday March 17th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

honestly....20 years old, so ancient now...wow, I think I should retire...

On Saturday March 17th, 2007, BloodySparrow (69) writes:

That's a damn good question! you can figure out how this would fit into the metaphor, but since you know you'll fall, maybe you should put a pillow down to make sure the fall doesn't break anybones?

On Saturday March 17th, 2007, BloodySparrow (69) writes:

I would think that would help you rise, since know what has happened will happen again... learn from your mistakes!!! (I'm sorry I'm drunk, but what I say should still stand on... somthing)

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