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remember

tears streem down my face
every time I hear your name
every time I remeber your dead
every time the memorie plays again,

why couldnt I have saved you
why couldnt I have taken youre place
when the door flew open how did you fall out
when I dream of you little sister
I dream of you lying in a puddle of blood
you were instantly dead at only three
im sorry but I dont remeber anything about you
except for death
to you I cherish always and forever
with love youre big sister

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On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

'Tis depressing, the tragedy of death. Though comfort sometimes seems like letters in some random order, I truly am sorry for your loss.

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:

coly..this was powerful. you are lovely, dear. *hugs*

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, JiNx (142) writes:

oh thats so sad. My eyes are all teary. Depressingly well written write..

On Wednesday November 23rd, 2005, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

Its hard to find a sentence that places substance to what has happened in this write. All I know is that what you are is a hella of a lot more important then what you want yourself to be. Much respect Coly. Daniel

On Wednesday November 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

Now that poem just took my heart and pulled it out. Wow, great writing, the feeling is felt by the time you reach the center of the second verse! Breath taking poem I'd say!

On Sunday November 20th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:

God...talk about having your feelings...all that you know..all that you care about...all placed into an industrial sized blender...on 'mutilate'...this is where I am right now...

On Sunday November 20th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:

...There are 750 million things that I want to say to you...but there is nothing that I can say...nothing that will ease your pain...I'm sorry.

On Friday November 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

This is the most heartwrenching poem I've ever read.

On Thursday November 17th, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

maybe it's better not to have known her better, then again how should i know, well written

On Wednesday November 16th, 2005, Army Barbie (491) writes:

Damn sad story. I'm sorry for you. Memory* =) Just trying to help.

On Wednesday November 16th, 2005, Jedi_MindFuck (318) writes:

a truly sad write. you expressed your pain well. my condolences for your loss.

On Wednesday November 16th, 2005, coly (76) writes:

i lost my sister when i was four this is to her with love

On Wednesday November 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:

hmmmmm... that's weird... anyway, i really like this one. the form is great and i can really feel your emotion. the spelling is getting better. did you just write this? it is great. i really like it alot. ((((((((((coly)))))))))) *~`void`~*

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