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Giving this all away

I will give you my soul
Give you my body
You just have to promise
You are good to me

I will get together with you
Only if you be true
If you be good to me
Then this will be all for you

Now i've givin up everything
And now you kill me
You hurt my heart
Now its torn apart

I don't know why you did this
I didn't know you were like this
I don't care what you say or do
I just want my life back from you

You took it away
Without having anything to say
Then you left without a sign
Taking everthing i left behind

My body, my heart
My soul, My skin
My flesh, my bones,
My things, my feelings

You don't care you took all that
You don't care about anyhting
you just used me for my stuff
You didn't care about me

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On Tuesday January 1st, 2008, Rhys Ki (126) writes:

I like the way you expressed these feelings that many probably couldn't express. thanx for sharing the hurt.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, prettydisgrace (142) writes:

this is great, youve expressed pain in your words,well done

On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, nell (328) writes:

nothing can take your heart and soul unless you let it,such familiar pain in this, i know it's cliche, but it makes you stronger in the end

On Sunday July 23rd, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

I don't think your heart is one that can be taken away. Bruised badly, perhaps but yours to keep if you want to learn to love again.

On Thursday July 13th, 2006, mywristshurt (525) writes:

the begining i dont agree with at all... then again i ask for people to hurt me.. but towards the end i agree with the pain and hurt and i know it sucks when people dont give a flying fuck.. if you need me, im usually on dp

On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:

This was just great, fantastic. I love it and felt the pain so barefully I was left speechless and rendered bruised from these words.

On Thursday May 18th, 2006, A_Spiral_Downward (28) writes:

This is amazing... I know the feeling also... you words are powerful and I can feel the pain. Great write.

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, Ezimo (269) writes:

thanks

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

I know the feeling. I could have written the same thing. Well done. ^V^

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, coly (76) writes:

wow in so many words i know how u feel and i also know how bad it hurts sorry

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