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Exquisite Corpse

last night
and each night before
still resonate
as dreams
and nothing more
fingers
lips
tongues
paint a map
that isn't gone
skin on skin
breath on breath
not close enough
heartbeats match
better yet

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On Tuesday March 20th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

fucking portrait painted, wonderfull

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, heartdripsblack (777) writes:

i really liked this. well done. ~ red.

On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, Mylissa (1056) writes:

I think it is perfect the way it is. I read it choppy, I enjoy how that leaves you wanting more.

On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Mylissa (1056) writes:

and more. :} Love it.

On Saturday February 10th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:

It seems unfinished. Maybe that was your intention? In any case, I'm intrigued.

On Thursday January 18th, 2007, heartdripsblack (777) writes:

very different. but i liked it. ~ red

On Thursday March 23rd, 2006, Lydia Jade (783) writes:

I like the imple flow of it...Im not really sure of exaclt what its about and the image it creates in my head is of twisted body parts and shadows...so yes...it is interesting as they said before...but it has a unique quality

On Thursday March 23rd, 2006, Lydia Jade (783) writes:

Simple*

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:

i agree with Myrrhkuri, this is interesting

On Monday January 9th, 2006, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (106) writes:

interesting

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