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existing on the edge of negative space
shroud in silk; bound in lace
kissing the twilight; stealing the nite's embrace

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On Friday December 9th, 2005, Rone4611 (156) writes:

now i have the nirvana song "negitive creep" stuck in my head. this was pleasurably simple, and beautiful. im with blueskies

On Monday November 7th, 2005, manywalks (947) writes:

Simplicity and grace. ~ mw

On Saturday November 5th, 2005, blue (1700) writes:

hmm. interesting.. not sure if i get the message, but it did read well.. minimalism is under-rated. keep at it. ~b

On Saturday November 5th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

nice... I know this is a contradiction, but the only way I can describe it is "vividly vague".

On Friday November 4th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

something about the last line made me want more, but it was a good poem...i think shortness can be greatness if done just right.

On Friday November 4th, 2005, Gold Dust Woman (172) writes:

way short but it has a nice touch to it.

On Friday November 4th, 2005, Err0r (564) writes:

Thats so short, but sweet. Sometime the greatest pleasures in life are not even four lines long. :)

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