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im in love

this makes you want to scream
your sounds
your face and its gentle whispers of pleasure
the delecate touch of pleasure at ur command
its blissful elegence
plunging into extesy a mind blowing experience
youve given me
a characteristic of life love and happiness
your preasence
a commitment that i myself dont understand but love
i love every part
the way your eyes cascade across my face
finding every possible weakness
knowing my everymove before myself
im in love
can u tell

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On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, waterchica999 (38) writes:

I like it I really do theres just something missing when u read it...I can't figure it out... But is a very lovely poem anyways

On Friday June 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (37) writes:

very well written. a feeling almost all of us have felt... thats what makes it so good

On Thursday June 29th, 2006, K_Love (684) writes:

That's beautiful. Such a familiar feeling I know myself. Lovely job.

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