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Equilibrium

Equilibrium

i'm looking at the boundaries
(the ones we never crossed)
and introspective inquiries
examining the cost
reveal to me, presumably
there's really no love lost

no love made
no love lost
nothing strained
no love made
nothing ventured
nothing gained

yes, both of us have just a bit of hypocrite inside
both of us are sometimes known to let our weakness guide
and both of us sure like to get our two bits on the side

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On Wednesday May 4th, 2005, Sin (1636) writes:

..wow..damn that was pure poetic genius

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

wow...my stars...your words are so intricatly crafted...oh, how do you write so beautifully?

On Sunday September 14th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

After I read your poetry I feel satisfied...I don't find myself making mental corrections or improvements when I read your work like I do with some others...there are no imperfections for me to find! Bravo! ~Faerie~ <3

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, Audrey_Star (29) writes:

I'm not a big fan of rhyme...but I gotta tell ya, this one just does it for me.

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

This is pure drama spun from the dust of dreamscape expressionistic minimalism, cut and scratched w/ the blades of existentialism...beautiful allegories. This is a splendid read; an introspective slide out from the subconcious vs. the concious.

On Sunday March 30th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:

wow you are a very talented poet, i love this

On Wednesday March 12th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

you know those days when you just KNOW that if you spent that buck you'd win the lotto.

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