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im drunk but not from liquor
for love is all the quicker

im hurt but not from wounds
but from the way i feel for you

im dead but not from death
but the heart ripped from my chest

im haunting after death
to tourture you to death

to join me in this hell
that you've created for us


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On Monday November 14th, 2005, fushigi no kaosu (88) writes:
awsome. just awsome. quick and strait to the point. beautifly done.


On Monday November 14th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
heh, well put, fiesty and brutal, i like it. damn good write; how I wish I could scream this in a certain person's face a few times, it might make me feel a little better, but he probably wouldn't get the point anyway. his loss. take pride in this


On Sunday November 13th, 2005, coly (76) writes:
thats fucken an aswome way of putting that



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