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as i lie here on
the the insane aslum floor
watching frogs fly
through a blood green sea
i wonder how it got to be

a whisper in the distance
thats all it was at first
but as the days came to pass
i came to listen to this whisper
in my head

but then this whisper started
yell so i listened
to its ranting truths
but soon it was to late
and i couldn't take control

i tried to tell anyone
to yell to everyone
but i found i couldn't
even whisper to the
guy next to me

so i took control the only way i knew...

as i lie here on the
insane asylum floor
watching the frogs fly
through the blood green sea
i stop and wonder

if someone had stopped
and gave a damn
would i still be lying on
the insane asylum floor?





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On Saturday November 19th, 2005, Solitary Dreamer (30) writes:
very cool..I really like the rythm of it..very well written


On Saturday November 12th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
I must say I'm quite taken by this poem, the opening stanza is perfect and the rest of the poem just falls in line.....I liked this


On Friday November 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
and oddly enough, i'm there now. loved it


On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, tears of decadence (222) writes:
damn.. this is really good.. yea.. ill give a damn for ya.. i too have lied on that floor.. just wondering why it was that i was there.. but then i realized it was just the beggining to my entrance into my own heaven n hell


On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, leluna (14) writes:
I can feel the floor- been there. well written!



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