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i see you in the shadows

in the corner of my eye

every time i think of you

i cant help but wonder why

why the person i love most in life

is the one that drives me mad

as insanity sets in

your face begins to fade

you asked me if i loved you

and i begged with you to stay

but insanity had taken hold

and i had to let you go

you said id never be happy

living life this way

i yelled and screamed

but you wouldnt let me stay

as insanity set in and i was

forced to let you go

the people know ive gone insane

i can see it in thire face

as im talking to your stone

i touch the words written there

"my sanity forever lost without you"



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On Monday October 23rd, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
Aww. So Sad. I think I can relate to this. I just wrote a poem similer to this today:-) Nicely written:-) ][Nstant ][Nsanity


On Sunday March 12th, 2006, heartdripsblack (768) writes:
awsome job


On Saturday March 4th, 2006, MindRape (872) writes:
ouch...this cuts deep


On Friday December 30th, 2005, JiNx (142) writes:
Very nicely written.. quite tragic.


On Saturday November 19th, 2005, Solitary Dreamer (30) writes:
"talking to your stone" surprised me as well...very well written piece I enjoyed reading it.


On Sunday November 6th, 2005, Liz (406) writes:
A lot of really cool things in here. I was fooled right up until "talking to your stone". Great concept of insanity instead of talking about what really happened. Proofreading might be the only way to enhance this.


On Sunday November 6th, 2005, Liz (406) writes:
Critiques aside, though, thank you for sharing your favorite.


On Monday October 24th, 2005, aCiD aNgEL (35) writes:
wow, this was a great write. ive been there... thanks for that. keep up the good work, welcome to DP and stick around ok? :) - aCiD



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