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Good Bye

You torture me every day
It's like you enjoy it this way.
If only you could see
What you're doing to me.

All the promises you break
And the advice you never take.
You're so blind to me,
If only you could see.

Many thoughts run through my head
As I lie in bed.
Thinking of a way
To say
GOOD BYE

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On Saturday February 17th, 2007, An Expired Member (33) writes:

wow, this is really cool. i like this a lot

On Sunday June 11th, 2006, An Expired Member (19) writes:

Yes, say good bye but it won't help you if you won't be able to get up your ass to face the fact that you allow them to torture you. And something: why do you take promises that are ought to break?

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Yes, say your goodbyes and don't look back, cuz its not worth the time.-Kefka

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:

sorry it cut me off. "assholes who make our lives hell..." is what it's supposed to say...

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:

i really like the way this poem captures all the shit u put up with every day and how u wish you could just make it stop and just stop caring, but it also shows how we can't choose who we like and don't like, and how we often like the assholes who make ou

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

i have felt this way so many times....Thank you for putting it into words...I love it

On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

all too clear. brilliant! =)

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

very to the point and very well concluded, well done *~*aNDReW*~*

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, celestine_moon (53) writes:

it sucks at first, but being alone is better than being with someone who makes you feel this way. sometimes you just gotta know when to say goodbye. i'm glad you've reached that point. good luck and nice write. -moon

On Thursday June 26th, 2003, The_Scavenger (32) writes:

Nice write. full of emotions, both of hatred and of love. confusion also has its part. Excellent use of words. Keep it up

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

very heartfelt, and i again understand your pain

On Wednesday April 16th, 2003, Bast (896) writes:

Goodbye is just a way to say hello to life alone...

On Wednesday April 16th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

great i like sounds like me some days

On Monday April 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

I realy liked this it was very good for real I feel the same way, so good job keep it up.

On Saturday June 14th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

say your goodbyes, and then find those worth saying hello to

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