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A Dream Come True

This isn't my best work so go easy on me...

Waking up next to you,
My head resting on your chest.
You look me in the eyes,
And tell me I'm your one and only.
That we will always be together,
And nothing will change.
I close my eyes taking it all in,
The fact that we are finally together.
It isn't another dream,
It is reality...

That would be my dream come true.

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On Sunday April 24th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:

Love the ending... kinda like it is, but its not... kinda... idk... its cool though. hehehe ~*~Tart~*~

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (137) writes:

very peaceful...makes me feel good...

On Sunday July 18th, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:

amazing...breathtaking...like im absolutely breathless...hit me right in the chest...

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, a restless wanderer (15) writes:

the night before might feel good for a while, but the next morning always lasts forever, good luck, dreams do come true

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

The feeling you're experiencing in this is very sought after. Express it every chance you get! It's beautiful.

On Friday January 30th, 2004, blackdarkness (311) writes:

paints a great picture

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Blacken_Heart (22) writes:

awww...thats a good one too, I like it.

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

Thank you all for wonderful comments, I was kinda worried about this one and Secrets. I'm glad so many liked it. It really makes be happy!

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Abbyernathie (68) writes:

Ahh, my favorite saying: "if only." Great write indeed.

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, hopeless (62) writes:

im honestly speachless because this is exactly what ive dreamed.. and you put it into words... this is nice... and im glad ur back with writing hun... ~hopeless

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, Suicidal Tendencies (27) writes:

I like it. That used to be my dream too, untill it came and went and he broke my heart. Hopefully its better for you! Great write!

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, Aurora_Light (573) writes:

nice indeed i like it it speaks of hope that so many lose i'm glad that u havent yet

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, The_Scavenger (32) writes:

Great write. Those words describe my own dream come true but mostlikly with a different person in mind.;)

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