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~Pain~

Hey, I would like to know what everyone thinks. This is a piece to my multigenre research paper on Down Syndrome. My project is due in 2 weeks so please comment and let me know what you think. Thankz

I feel all alone in this world.
There are not many like me,
They think they understand everything,
but their far from the truth.
I try my hardest,
but will always be many years behind.
To be looked at like a monster,
all because I'm different.
I am a person too.
One who needs to be loved,
just like the rest.
If only people could see
all my hurt and pain,
Then maybe,
Just maybe,
They would understand

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On Saturday October 1st, 2005, the dried flower (82) writes:

i like

On Monday November 10th, 2003, frost bite (48) writes:

If there were more people who fealt like that it would be an understanding but strange and timid world. nice write though, that should fit good

On Friday November 7th, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (80) writes:

excellent. if more people thought like that then the world would be a better place. great write.

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:

definitely thanks for sharing. With work like this, hopefully those who read will come closer to understanding. Or greaten their empathy for those less fortunate. :::OLd

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

yes it applies to anyone who is different..my niece is autistic...she doesnt even realize she is different...it's like it isn't her problem it is everyone elses..thanks for writing this hun.

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

yes this is the aditude to have! I'm glade some do!

On Friday October 31st, 2003, An Expired Member (26) writes:

i agree that this really does apply more to down syndrome i mean it applies to almost everyone and if people would only truley love eachother we would be in a better place right now good write M.H.A.

On Friday October 31st, 2003, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

outstanding! this applies to more than just down syndrome. i applaud you for writing this. U.P.

On Friday October 31st, 2003, BlackRobedMage (18) writes:

This is an excellent work about Down Syndrome. Really well expressed.

On Friday October 31st, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

im doing a project on down syndrome too right now.. this is a good poem for it.. good job

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