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Unhappy Ending

My life is like a
twisted fairytale.
The frog price
always ends up
with the bitch.
My price rides
towards my hell hole
( I mean castle)
on his fat ass
( I mean overweight donkey).
I run out
in false hopes,
but once again,
my life has an
unhappy ending.

This is by a friend of mine... Her name is Ashley but we all call her Abby.

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On Monday September 1st, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

That was quite entertaining Abby! - Kryz

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

interesting.

On Sunday August 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (71) writes:

very nice. . it really like this it is different and very well done!

On Friday August 15th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

I like it....

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:

hey everybody it's abby the one who wrote this. it will be on my account soon, so come read my stuff. my screen name is Abbyernathie

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, finaldestiny (98) writes:

awesome very original my props!!!

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

its cool, show us more.-Kefka

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (121) writes:

ha, tell her i said it's awesome

On Friday July 25th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

abby wrote this!!? tell i say i like it hehe it makes me smile and laugh

On Friday July 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:

i like the way you compare things! pretty cool!

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

you kick ass, abby! bravo!!

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:

cute. good work.

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Clementine (153) writes:

this is a slight differnt twist on an old unoringal sob theme of poetry

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