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This wasn't exactly what I had I had in mind when I started this poem but this is what it ended up to be. I think it still needs some works so if you have comments on how to fix it let me know. I just threw somethings together and I don't think it flows very good.

They say things happen for a reason,
But do you ever wonder what that is?
Why things can't go your way for a while,
Or why everything bad happens at once.
You would think it would be more balanced,
Some good things then some bad.
Not all bad for what seems like forever,
Then one good thing.
They say everyone has a soul mate,
But then again if they do then why do some people die alone?
Your not suppose to choose who you fall in love with,
Then how come people get divorces,
Aren't they messing with fate?
They say don't smoke you will die sooner,
Well maybe you get killed in a car crash?
That had nothing to do with smoking.
It could have been your fate.
How come we can't know our fate?
Wouldn't that make life a lot easier?




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On Monday September 1st, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
I am glad you chose to write about this topic, but remember Life isn't about the end result, it's about the trip along the way. -Kryz


On Sunday July 18th, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:
completely agree with kryz...its not the end that matters...its what u do with the time you have...like u said u could die in a car accident. so live every day to its fullest.


On Thursday August 21st, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
I couldn't give you any additions.cuz its not my own piece..this is up to you to figure out..-Kefka


On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
would life not be boring if we knew where it were headed? or maybe, we'd realize that the journey is what's important... perhaps it would be better to know our fates...


On Friday August 15th, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:
I have thought about this a few times myself...great write.....


On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:
this is a great write. it totally applies to life...


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:
Fate is a strange and unpredictable thing, I totally believe in it though. Excellent write, goes straight to the heart. a_o_h


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Kittichoo (44) writes:
I'm not much for fate. I believe we make out own but you do have some good ideas though... Maybe try adding more to make it smoother.


On Thursday July 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:
I really, really like this, Kevin. (And its not just for that reason either, though that is part of it) it eases your mind, yet it makes it seem hopeless. To me life is nothing but a paradox, and you demonstrated this wonderfully. It doesn't rhyme, but


On Sunday July 27th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
My name isn't Kevin, you must have me confused with someone else.


On Thursday July 24th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
This kinda seems like someone's last thoughts. Almost what someone would think after getting shot... I don't know why but it gave me that picture in my mind. I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.


On Thursday July 24th, 2003, adreamnotwanted (40) writes:
i think fate is something set up at birth.. but as we grow older, we gain control of our fate... good work on this..i enjoyed it alot..ADNW


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:
The people that know there fate, know it becouse it is there fate to know it. They act in a certain way after knowing there fate wish is then there fate. I love fate all the way to extremes. Same way goes with this poem.


On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:
i think it's wonderful... i think the same words of wisdom you gave to me also aply to this piece... good job *~BrightBlack~* :- )


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
nice i think it would make it easier if we knew but then we could chang it and then it wouldn't be fate


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
good write i like it


On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:
sounds good to me..the 's are ?'s though



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