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" Waiting" by Rebel_Angel

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let me know what you think and any changes you think should be made. I'm thinking it doesn't sound just right...


As the days go by,
I sit and wonder why?
Why your with her instead of me,
What I did wrong so there was no we.

Waiting for my chance,
Before there's no time left to dance.
Not wanting to think about you leaving before I get my chance,
For I would be left all alone for my very last dance.

Still thinking about us,
And wondering why it never was;
Is a horrible feeling,
I'm left with unwilling,

But that is only one possible outcome that I will have to deal with when the time comes.




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On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:
Another untitled eh? Well you must call it "Waiting"..-Kefka


On Sunday August 10th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
Give this a title...it deserves to have a title


On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:
i don't know what u're talking about, it sounds right to me!


On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, finaldestiny (98) writes:
i think it is a well written poem, just in the first paragraph dont put two questions in a row, otherwise it's all good, my props!


On Monday July 21st, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:
very good...I like it...Blacky


On Monday July 14th, 2003, The_Scavenger (32) writes:
nice right its really good. it is just radiating with emotion. i really like this.


On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:
well my friend it fits the way you feel about him very well. but it sounds fine to me. nice on my friend



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