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The Bitch

This was writen by a friend of mine who asked me to post it for him please let me know what oyu think and I will forward the message to him. Thank you!

Each step I take now marked by death
The downward spiral of crystal meth
I sampled a bump and I was sold
A fine beige powder more precious than gold
She keeps me up, my body slims
A once bright future like twilight dims
I used to crave a cap or two,
Then a ball, now an ounce won't do!
She helps me dance, she makes me rush
She rots my spinal cord to mush
She's a slut, a common whore;
This only makes me want her more
She makes me smile, she gets me high
Without the BITCH i feel I'll die
Only at parties?, ( Just one more time)
She led me down a path of crime
I sold my ass I robbed some banks
All for her; She gave no thanks
Each step I take sill marked by death
Cause once again I'm snorting meth.

By:Joe Geiger

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On Wednesday January 9th, 2008, totaltrip (49) writes:

On Monday January 7th, 2008, Circe Avalon (182) writes:

it was very good and mind boggling.

On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:

good rhyme on this - i like it

On Saturday July 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

I can totally relate to this - Dark__Goddes-

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:

I really enjoyed this poem and could relate (to a point) I wasn't such a fan of BITCH being in CAPS. That seemed kind of lame, but other than that amazing.. Well done

On Monday January 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

i culdnt take my eyes off it it was inspiring and yet grim and morbid

On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:

Like wise, I found this to be not a work that dropped my attention before the last syllable. ~JMDW~

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, Jadedwings (356) writes:

WoW tell Joe I'm feelin him big time...been there done that...still there doing that...but 1 ?? to Hellsend..whats the diff between meth and glass...same thing No?

On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I'm not sure the difference, I haven't talked to Joe in a while but if I do I will ask him and let you know.

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, Deja vu (6) writes:

all it takes is one more time.. a beautiful mind is one who can step out of their own situation and see it for what it really is

On Thursday October 23rd, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

hmm. this is interesting. i don't completely understand, having not gone the path of drugs like that... but cutting is also a sweet and dangerous mistress...

On Thursday October 9th, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:

wow, i never robbed a bank for it, and glass is so much better but then again, it's still bad...oh well addiction is the price we pay for having pain that won't go away......or is it the other way around....

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:

I've had this addiction before, I had to get away from a few people to rid myself of it...tell you friend he's expressed the feeling very well...~Delilah~

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Tell Joe that hes written well bout the Bitch..-Kefka

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

haha, very catchy

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:

tell joe i said great write!

On Monday July 21st, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

I know who he feels i used to do meth...a lot...i dont anymore but this was VERY well done i love it...Blacky

On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

OMFG I LOVE LOVE LOVE this piece if I could add favs...this would go in it (and no I don't do meth) lol

On Monday July 7th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

lovely. you know i wrote that lemon pie pome you wanted... -B

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

hmm do i know him my friend? but even if i do i still like and a gree w/ Markus Porkwing drugs r bad ;)

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

oppsies great* sorries

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Amandasauris rex (72) writes:

This was a very good peice. Very much enjoyed. I loved the way it rhymed, but didn't sound corney. Most def. getting added to my fav. list. *kitten*

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

Drugs are bad!

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

ditto. good poem tho! i do so enjoy rhyme :)

On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:

that was really good! but sad at the same time...

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