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Thinking

I wrote this in like 10 min and I didn't think it sounded too bad? let me know what u think! Go easy on me please.

I think about you all the time,
But do you think of me?
Do you wish to be with me as badly as I wish to be with you?
I don't know, and probably never will,
But if you do you don't show it well,
My head says let go,
But my heart says no!
How do I decide what to do,
Waiting for the answer isn't working,
I've been waiting,
But nothing ever comes about,
To take away all my doubt.

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On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:

not bad for 10 minutes

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

I could agree with the others..but i will point out one thing..Hart? you mean Heart..-Kefka

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:

i really think this is good..its like a mind process written out

On Monday July 21st, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

Sometimes the greatest work happens the fastest...I really like this keep it up

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

i familirize with your write which is a good write for a matter of a few minutes

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, Ravenblade (274) writes:

Great write, especially for 10 minutes..It has an awesome flow and rhythm to boot, which are my 2 biggest poetic fetishes, those and imagery...I will definately look out for more work by you..

On Thursday June 26th, 2003, The_Scavenger (32) writes:

Aurora is right we have helped you as much as we can an probably as much as you can stand.. the chioce is yours to make. no one can make it for you or tell you what to do. its all up to you. I pray for you.

On Friday May 9th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (341) writes:

I like this. I know how you feel. Nice work!

On Sunday May 11th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

i fully agree.... and its amazing what we pour out of our hearts and souls in a matter of minutes

On Sunday May 11th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

Rebel u've hread my commets and what i think u should do with it but as i've said i'm staying out of ur love life for as long as u want me to.

On Saturday June 14th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

i'm there.. right now... i'm weighing the cost of speaking my mind... it's heavy

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