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Ok, I've been away from DP for a long time, I've been very busy and haven't had much time for anything, but I've started writing again and I'd like to know what people think it doesn't seem quite complete yet... Comments are very welcome.

Love
If only he was the way I wanted him to be
then I wouldn't have to worry about him hurting me.
But love doesn’t always play by the rules
And it can make us all look like fools.

Some days you have to take what you can get
Other days you are all set.

Why does such a simple word have to hurt so much?
Yet make me long for that special touch.



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On Sunday October 28th, 2007, Aurora_Light (574) writes:
your right it doesn't seem done just yet but i like what you have. btw hi chica long time no speak



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