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"Carnations" by nonhero_until_death

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Some say happiness can never be defined.
Yet some people think life is controlled by the divine.
Maybe the way I interpret it is different from your mind.
Yet I know that this must be, and I always share what I find.

Moments thankfully stretched out by pure enjoyment.
These moments that can heal me in times of mental and physical torment.
Moments that I look forward to no matter where I’ve gone and went.
Like the symphonic hypnotic patter of mountain rain upon my tent.

When I’m in the forest, far away from cities and all is green.
On the highest mountain peaks, or skiing the deepest steeps, absorbing sights rarely seen.
Or sitting, in silent meadows with my dad, getting drunk off Jim Beam.
Moments that are always great, no matter which direction they careen.

Or rolling in the Camry, filled with heads, all familiar.
Smoking fine herb rolled in chocolate blunts, lined with sticky honey interior.
No matter who is there, or what is said, nobody ever feels inferior.
Even if someone gets hurt, or if curse words are spurt, we’re never wearier.

Then there’s hot boxin’ in the big body, Coronet, with my best friend.
It’s these moments that make me hate, avoid, and fear the night’s end.
Ditchin’ class to smoke weed and relax, who cares if they want to suspend?
With these moments, the lie of a learning experience can never contend.

Loving lips, the sweetest taste I know in all creation.
The simple presence of she, is all I need for that certain sensation.
When her eyes sparkled, in surprise of my visit, on my unofficial vacation.
And the love I felt when she thanked and hugged me for her gift, a bouquet of carnations.

This definition of happiness, I’m certain of, but don’t ask how.
But I did my best to explain it with the rush of ideas from my brow.
In the end I hope you can see, and happiness can find you, then and now.
Cause I know I have this moment, I finished my poem. Ciao!




- Danny Wharton



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On Wednesday July 19th, 2006, your_only_love (163) writes:
We live for those beautiful, fleeting moments. This reminds me of my home up in NorCal. Thanks :)


On Saturday March 29th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
I loved this... I believe I once told someone 'I live for moments'.... so true.. so very true.


On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, Six-Out (1798) writes:
Excellent hero. It was so descriptive, made it so much better. You can tell this is not something made up, it is real life. Great job.


On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, Wester (23) writes:
Hmm, I'm kind of running out of stuff to say in my comments, this just all came together beautifully, no weak lines or anything, this is just about as close to perfection as you get, great work.


On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
I realy enjoyed reading this piece... nicely done


On Friday March 21st, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
an excellent poem all together, you captured the frentic peace of youth, in cars and flowers and the people held dear... carnations is the proper title... excellence. i haven't read much of you, but i'll remedy that error.


On Monday August 18th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Gotta second this, Bubbles said it just right.


On Friday March 21st, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
When you read this to me...a mere 5 minutes after you wrote it...I could tell right away that it was your master-piece. This poem made me cry and laugh. It's my favorite(and not just because it's partly about me and my car, LoL). I am in awe


On Friday March 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:
beautiful work. great ending, lol, "i finished my poem, Ciao!" lol, i love it, loveit loveit. lovely work


On Friday March 21st, 2003, cre (507) writes:
Wow.. this is very good and your descriptions really take me there. Great job.



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