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Pure Bliss

It's miraculous when the clouds dissipate.
The forests regrow, and the screaming winds quiet and hesitate.

Time stands still, a million butterflies scurry about my abdomin.
When I'm elevated to a previously unforseeable elation.

Nothing else - neither war, nor peace - matters.
My thoughts, troubles, and dreams all cease their ageless battles.

In this moment I witness such a beauty that I am in awe.
Michaelangelo himself would have had the inspiration to supercede his best job.

Rains douse all fires, civil and wild.
Not such a joy could be duplicated by any child.

All this because you smiled.

Danny Wharton

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On Saturday September 27th, 2008, Jonas (877) writes:

this made me giggle: 'tee-hee', for this, sir, is sweet as pie.

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

hey, I had to re-read this after your comment on cheshire... it is reminiscent of this:) but this is truly a love poem

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (690) writes:

It is astonishing how such a feeling like Love can be found on this Earth. It is blessing, a wonder. Your poem is too... Velvet.

On Saturday April 19th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

...And you thought this poem wouldn't get you in the top 3, Danny? Crazy fool.

On Friday March 28th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

::gasp:: I have never commented on this poem?? Well shame on me!! It, like ALL of your others, is absolutly amazing. You are a great talent.

On Friday March 21st, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

what a great ending...guess its strange how little things make us feel great...

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

this is a great peice, i must admit it's a feeling i have felt (only nce, mind you) it's great that you could capture it. I do know the bliss you are speaking of (don't repaet that :P)

On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

I feel this way about someone very special... and i could bever put it in words. Thank you for doing it for me!

On Wednesday February 19th, 2003, cre (507) writes:

I have read this many times -- it is undoubtedly one of my favorite pieces here. Excellent job, it is beautiful. ty for sharing. -mb

On Wednesday February 19th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

Damn

On Saturday February 8th, 2003, Litteratus (73) writes:

I concur with autumnflame ;-). I particularly like the weather & forest imagery.

On Tuesday January 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Your poetry really coinsides with my thinking. I wonder if it does this to anyone else. I like how you wrote out the feelings about a smile. It's amazing **autumnflame**

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