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"One Pure Day" by nonhero_until_death

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I was unsure of her emotion
I was clueless of what she thought
I was unable to investigate
I was scared the words would get caught

and
Now I Know

She acts like she still likes me
She never confirmed it with words
She should sense my obvious attraction
She thinks that from before I'm still hurt

but
Now She Knows

Your friend told me that you still like me
Your friend said you thought me angry with you
Your friend tried to convey my assurances
Your friend failed to reach you, too

and
Now We Know

It makes sense that our fears reflected
It shows that our true feelings emerged
It became that we spilled all of the beans
It is now open, and our contradictory fears are purged

but
How'll We Know

One day she will try to reach me
One day she'll discuss our crush
One day we will say it face to face
One pure day. . . I won't try to rush

and
We Will Know



-Danny Wharton



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On Sunday September 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:
great write.


On Saturday May 8th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
i'm trying to get thru my feelings towards a certain someone now also.. how very true. nice poem. hope u get her. hope i get him :)


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, Liz (401) writes:
Good luck to you. Nice to see things are still moving forward with her.


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
Your style shines through this write keep it coming!+Fallen Angel+


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, angelunderneath (76) writes:
Love it! Each stanza starting with the same word, separated by the different "knows"...wonderful!


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, darkvamptress (20) writes:
~mistress~*


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, darkvamptress (20) writes:
wow that is really good i like it. i just have one tip for you dont use peoples names in ur poetry because its kinda a little annoying not trying to be rude ot anything. just trying to help but it is really good i hoope you keep the good work up.. ~mistr


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, cre (507) writes:
wow. I LOVE this non!! Incredible write . . the wording, the rhyme, the flow . . absolutely magnificent. Truly. Great job.



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