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Just do It

Just do it
Kill me now
take away my pain
take the knife and
slit my wrist
take the gun and
shoot my head
Just do it now God
Kill me god
Take away my pain
take the dagger and
stab my heart
akit my wrist
shoot my head
stab my heart
I don't care how
Just do it know
Kill me now and
take away all my pain.

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On Friday January 6th, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i can relate to this. at times this is how i feel. i like how the poem just flows.

On Tuesday January 3rd, 2006, dismal silence (20) writes:

i feel this so well this morning, every word of it, well expressed, rushed but good, sometimes things are better rushed, not really rushed but just put it all down and dont care ya know....i pray you find what would make you happy one day

On Monday January 2nd, 2006, Alec Pure (329) writes:

okay well....um i think you rushed this a little and tried to force something..take your time and this would be worlds better not bad though...express the emotions that lead to this more ~~gap~~

On Monday January 2nd, 2006, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

i like this...tis how i've been feeling for awhile...a week or so...very nice...i hope somebody is able 2 take away all ur pain..cuz nobody deserves to be hurt that badly...but thats jus my opinion...great write! -Kel

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