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A stranger wanders an alabaster desert of winter
In search of a snow queen

The earth asleep beneath a thick, white blanket
Resting for the labors of spring

He walks among leafless trees of gray and black
Outlining where tender, green life has been
and will be again

His legs heavy, he stops
He watches feather crystals of ice
Stack themselves upon bony branches
Like sand in an hour-glass

With each grain that falls
He feels his skin harden
And his heart slow

Cold begins to creep into his muscles
Turning them to brittle stone

His eyes freeze into black ice
But he can still see

He can still see as she approaches

He tries to reach out to her
But, collapsing under the weight of what he has become,
He begins to shatter from the inside

First, icy marrow and bone
Then blood chilled to glass
and skin cracking like the surface of a frozen pond

A million red splinters mingle with snow flakes
As they fall to the ground
To become a part of her kingdom, forever
  















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On Thursday October 2nd, 2008, Morbid_insanity (117) writes:
i love the imagery in this. its a nice medium between that wintery scene and time. (even the parallels between the winter and dessert imagery). its a wonderful piece


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:
Reminds me of back in the day when I used to role play...I love it..


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:
Wow... I felt pain as you described the body freezing and breaking >.< oh this is so good! I love it.. I hope I never hurt anyone like that ~Dawn


On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:
This is beautiful. I could imagine the scene in my head as the poem unfolded. Good job.. :)


On Friday April 25th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
A dark fairy tale indeed. You sure this isn't based on Snowqueen man? Cuz I sware this is the kind of effect she has on me heh.-Kefka


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, Seraphic (289) writes:
hm, this was by far the most interesting poem I've read. A dark fairytale...very nicely done


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
very different... I liked.


On Friday April 18th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
I love it! But I already told u that & why... thanks.


On Saturday April 19th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
sad but yet romantic....a ..yeah


On Friday April 18th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
beautiful and tragic... a faery tale, indeed.



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