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Tonight, the moon seems somehow different
Pale, gray, hungry

We move as we always have:
First for the woman
and then for the man

We look to each other's eyes
for the lust, that, like the weight of the earth
has always pulled us together

But tonight,
the light of this moon
reveals in our eyes, children
lost, alone, needing approval

After we are finished
the night's cold breath punishes us
biting our flesh
as if to tell us:
Our love has become sin

But tonight,
as we lie beneath this strange moon
we feel, somehow, forgiven






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On Sunday April 27th, 2008, Ms Moon (617) writes:
what makes this evencrazyer for me is the fact that my nickname is moon. and all of this is rue to me. i loves it. ^_^ great write


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:
Beautiful work!


On Monday April 4th, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:
very serene and beautiful


On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Jonas (877) writes:
like the tender reminiscience of innocence as it beautifully impales a soul cold and stricken with the realities and banalities of life. beauteous. hi, there, by the way! long time no speaky! talk to you soon, i hope!


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Brenya Rose (187) writes:
Very nice. As JustMe said, it's calm and low. It gives me a feeling of tranquility. Very very nice.


On Saturday May 17th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (622) writes:
BEAUTIFUL... low, calm... and very peaceful. I enjoyed this one much...thankyou for sharing it.~DW~


On Friday May 2nd, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
another piece of artwork...my applause to you.


On Thursday April 24th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
interesting, interesting, interesting.... I have been under that moon. One of my favorites from you... I love it.


On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
wow i like it


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:
ah, what a beautiful peice on the moon.. my soul is at peace, there is forgiveness.. *Tears*



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