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My pen in my hand
Poised above the paper
Like a man behind a woman

With its stiffness
I begin to press its tip into the page
Your body jerks away
As if from a tattooist's needle
Trembling from its pain and its permanence

I stroke your hair reassuringly and tell you:
"It is only words and ink and fantasy"
Your fingers dig into my thigh
Blessing the progress of my prose

"Where are we now?” you ask
"Alone on an island; the world turning only for us"
"Only for us..." you echo back, steadying your breath
" This will be our story" I continue
"Our story..." your voice slowly cracking

Questions consuming you like a forest fire
Or a virus
I lift my pen to remind you
That this is only words and ink and fantasy
...the infection rages on

The diamonds in your eyes become carbon black pebbles
And fall like the shadows of snowflakes

I watch as your skin and your blood
Turn translucent from doubt and from fear
I see your heart
Pulsing like a jellyfish swimming away from me

Helpless, I can only look on
As you reach out, grasping at nothing
Your form fading from my view

I write the final lines in the air
Letters and ink dropping to the floor
Making no sound



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On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:
Its as though I am there with you. You've painted a vivid picture for all to see. I love this.


On Friday November 21st, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:
this made me think....well done...


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
i can't say much about this, except i love it, i feel it, and i have tears in my eyes... i have a grasp of this, and these words... i feel like i've been there, or am there, or am i? i'm not even making sense. anyway... i love it.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
beautiful, brings back many painful memories, and yes :D i write with a pen to hehe *~*aNDReW*~*


On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:
fantastic display of words.. great write


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Pens...the tool of many a creation...-Kefka


On Friday August 15th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
.........whoa..... how sexy, how well written, how inspiring.... this is amazing. One giant metaphor that pulls you deeper and deeper with each word. I love this.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
breathless he owns the world in so far as much as he can wrap himself around it and she comes for the ride comes through the night to feed with him at the trough of creation and violation and everything that can come borne of the soul and dirty sheets


On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
The ending is my absolute favorite part of the poem.."Letters and ink dropping to the floor Making no sound"....i am also fond of the great metaphor you developed so delicately.


On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
this pulls you in expecting more, and then it ends, very nice...........O.



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